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My goodness this took me 13 hours to make put I'm really pleased with it!
Anyway this is my OC Glare.
.:EDIT:.
It seems that a lot of people are thinking this character is supposed to be original, while I appreciate the criticism, this character is mainly just for practice's sake and probably won't be used again. In fact she IS basically just a recolor of Tails. Her color scheme resembles Shadow and her shoes and gloves resemble Sliver. I just didn't feel like drawing Tails because when every I draw him and want to make him extra happy, and I just wanted a stationary character. The reason why her bio is so long is because A.) I wanted practice and B.) I just kind of think up stories for all the things I draw, even adoptables.
Again this is just an explanation and I thank you for the criticism ^^ C:
Here is her Bio
Anyway this is my OC Glare.
.:EDIT:.
It seems that a lot of people are thinking this character is supposed to be original, while I appreciate the criticism, this character is mainly just for practice's sake and probably won't be used again. In fact she IS basically just a recolor of Tails. Her color scheme resembles Shadow and her shoes and gloves resemble Sliver. I just didn't feel like drawing Tails because when every I draw him and want to make him extra happy, and I just wanted a stationary character. The reason why her bio is so long is because A.) I wanted practice and B.) I just kind of think up stories for all the things I draw, even adoptables.
Again this is just an explanation and I thank you for the criticism ^^ C:
Here is her Bio
Name:
Glare
Species:
Fox
Age:
Undecided (6 7 or 9)
Gender:
Female
Eyes:
Red
Pelt:
Black and White
Skin:
Unknown
Alignment:
Good
Affiliation:
Herself
Favorite Food:
Chocolates
Skills:
High acrobatic skills and reflexes
High physical durability
Enhanced jump
Eye color change
High observation skills
Moves and techniques:
Tail Swipe
Icey Glare
Fear Glare
Ability type:
Balanced
Abilities:
Speed
Power
Stamina
Intelligence
Intuition
____________________
Personality
She dislikes being restricted or being under estimated, if someone tells her she can't or shouldn't do something she takes it as a challenge, if she's offered help she'll often refuse it but it willing to give it to others. If someone helps her with out asking she may or may not complain depending on if she really needed it or not. She is skilled with coming up with plans of infiltration and solving problems. She tends to act cold towards people even if she likes them and only warms up if she trusts them.
_______________________
Birthplace:
Unknown/Undecided
Also Known By:
Red Eyes
Stub
Likes:
Sonic
Tails
Proving herself
Flying with Tails in his plane
Watching Tails build things
Putting Sonic to tests (Asking him to run to so and so within so and so time)
Amy(To a degree)
Knuckles
Espio
Solving logic puzzles
Coming up with plans
Being Praised (Although she won't admit it)
Rouge
Dislikes:
Being told what to do
Eggman
Amy when she's obsessing over Sonic
Being underestimated
Getting logic puzzles horribly wrong
When Tails' machines blow up (ether by destruction or mistake)
Having too much attention on her
_________________________
Her power is to stare at someone intensely when she is staring and using her ability her eyes turn blue.
The first ability is called Icey Glare, in which the target feels cold on the spot she is staring and can feel it even when they are looking away(kind of like that feeling your being watched)
The second is called Fear Glare, which if the target makes eye contact with Glare's eyes, they feel like they are being watched with whatever emotion Glare had for about 2 hours afterwards. For intense if you make eye contact with her in this state and she is sad then you will feel like begging eyes or saddened eyes are watching you, if she is angry or blazing with hate then you will feel angry or hateful eyes respectively.
I think that's it.
Please critique!
Glare
Species:
Fox
Age:
Undecided (6 7 or 9)
Gender:
Female
Eyes:
Red
Pelt:
Black and White
Skin:
Unknown
Alignment:
Good
Affiliation:
Herself
Favorite Food:
Chocolates
Skills:
High acrobatic skills and reflexes
High physical durability
Enhanced jump
Eye color change
High observation skills
Moves and techniques:
Tail Swipe
Icey Glare
Fear Glare
Ability type:
Balanced
Abilities:
Speed
Power
Stamina
Intelligence
Intuition
____________________
Personality
She dislikes being restricted or being under estimated, if someone tells her she can't or shouldn't do something she takes it as a challenge, if she's offered help she'll often refuse it but it willing to give it to others. If someone helps her with out asking she may or may not complain depending on if she really needed it or not. She is skilled with coming up with plans of infiltration and solving problems. She tends to act cold towards people even if she likes them and only warms up if she trusts them.
_______________________
Birthplace:
Unknown/Undecided
Also Known By:
Red Eyes
Stub
Likes:
Sonic
Tails
Proving herself
Flying with Tails in his plane
Watching Tails build things
Putting Sonic to tests (Asking him to run to so and so within so and so time)
Amy(To a degree)
Knuckles
Espio
Solving logic puzzles
Coming up with plans
Being Praised (Although she won't admit it)
Rouge
Dislikes:
Being told what to do
Eggman
Amy when she's obsessing over Sonic
Being underestimated
Getting logic puzzles horribly wrong
When Tails' machines blow up (ether by destruction or mistake)
Having too much attention on her
_________________________
Her power is to stare at someone intensely when she is staring and using her ability her eyes turn blue.
The first ability is called Icey Glare, in which the target feels cold on the spot she is staring and can feel it even when they are looking away(kind of like that feeling your being watched)
The second is called Fear Glare, which if the target makes eye contact with Glare's eyes, they feel like they are being watched with whatever emotion Glare had for about 2 hours afterwards. For intense if you make eye contact with her in this state and she is sad then you will feel like begging eyes or saddened eyes are watching you, if she is angry or blazing with hate then you will feel angry or hateful eyes respectively.
I think that's it.
Please critique!
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Vision: It shows you worked hard on this piece the pose is good.. her expression is a bit bland..also the other side of the characters hand looks a little off as well as the foot but good for what it is
Originality: I had to give the originality star 0.5 stars because it's just a black tails the fox minus the two tails.. so you might want to work on a better design for your character there.
Technique: You did SA style well just try to make the highlight shading smoother and a bit thicker
Impact: 2.5 stars <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/> overall the artwork is nice