Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×



Details

Submitted on
December 3, 2012
Image Size
272 KB
Resolution
1219×1219
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
108
Favourites
7 (who?)
Comments
7
Downloads
1
×
Song adoptable 1 by CleverConflict Song adoptable 1 by CleverConflict
20 points plz :3

song - kraken of the sea from earthbound

adopted by :iconuketaichohitsugaya:
Add a Comment:
 
:iconroxys:
I never ever seen a cute monster like this! But there are some little problems!I'm sorry to tell you this.
The body in my opinion is a little small than then head, and this ruin the art itself.
The paws are too flat to be real paws or hands...try to improve looking other antrophomorp figures or animal figures.
The colors are well combined but not so well blurred, in fact the tail, the dorsal fin, and the others black points ruin a little the grey skin of the monster. The eyes are a little wrong in this position (if it is like a Pokèmon or something then it's ok, never mind this part .). Those lines are maybe mustache?Cause the part that is facing the user must be provided as well. (A little but must!). Then, all that I had to tell ya, I spilled it out. I ends this critique whit :
Do your best and improve! You have a lot of fantasy and originality! Good luck! And never give up!
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
1 out of 2 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconuketaichohitsugaya:
._. I'm 16 points short, but if I can sell some adopts, I'll buy this <3
Reply
:iconcleverconflict:
CleverConflict Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok would you like me to put it on hold?
Reply
:iconcleverconflict:
CleverConflict Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok :3
Reply
:iconcleverconflict:
CleverConflict Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you ~
Reply
Add a Comment: